2021-12-24來源：海文考研
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should
1) describe the picture briefly
2) interpret the meaning and
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.(20 points)
參考范文
As is vividly portrayed in the cartoon, two people are climbing the mountain together. One of them sits on a higher step with his backpack beside his feet and complains，“I’m tired，I don’t want to climb anymore.” However，the partner carrying a bag catches up with him and hands him a bottle of water, he says, “Come on, take a break then continue to climb.” Under the picture lies a caption: On the Way.
The impressive drawing has profoundly revealed that the process of our life is just like the mountain-climbing and only by adjusting our own pace and persisting in our goals can we reach a higher life realm. We had lots of dreams when we were kids, but few were realized. For one thing, all kinds of interference make us give up sticking to dreams. For another, we haven’t integrated dreams into our life because of being anxious for success. The most common instance is that when we want to improve our health or obtain a better figure, majority of us may determine to do exercise, but often end in laziness and various excuses.
As the saying goes, the end of man is the beginning of God, only those who do their best can get the favor of heaven and enjoy the joy of victory. It is advisable for us, positive climbers, to view persistence and struggle as a lifestyle. May we enjoy the richness and beauty of life if we take these cognitions into action.
寫作思路：
一. 審題立意
要求
（1）描述圖片
（2）闡釋含義
（3）進行評論
二. 布局成文
總體框架：
開始段 3-4句
1. As is vividly portrayed in the cartoon, + 人物描述。
2. 描述具體圖片細節(jié)
3. 補充圖片底部說明文字
Under the picture lies a caption: ...
中間段
闡釋含義 4-5句
1. 主題句
The impressive drawing has profoundly revealed that ...
2. 展開論證
For one thing, ...
For another thing, ...
結尾段
給出評論 3-4句
1. 可引用名言
As the saying goes, ...
2. 提出看法與建議
It is advisable for us to ...
3. 包裝結尾，展望未來
May we enjoy ... if we ...
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